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"What are your thoughts on Sonic Universe: Issue #15? Also known as "Journey to the East"? Many Fiona haters loved this comic simply because of Fiona's "comeuppance" in it: getting punched by Sally, even scolded by her saying that she was never a Freedom Fighter, Sonic finding that action "hot", and Tails praising Sally and wishing she do it again, etc.
So, if you have a chance to rewrite the whole thing, what do you think it would be?"



When I first read this story it did make me angry what finoa said somewhat but I was bothered more by what "wasn't" said, Fiona was a bitch only from a stupid 180 turn thanks to flynn and if I would want ot fix this I would have to go back and fix the 180 turn and start from there. But since we can't do that I can say what I don't like wiht the scene. Sally shouldn't have had anything to say.  Why did sally have to sock fiona and not sonic? he was there when she bitch slapped tails, but no even at these moments you can't defend tails.

Sally wasn't even present at the time  fiona turned against them so why should she have a beef just form hear-say and second sonic should be more worked up but he DOESN'T why?. I'll make you an example.

your friend gets beaten up a former friend you use to know, when you come across that person at a later date asking your friend they jsut beat up fora favor, your cousin socks them in the face, the cousin only heard what happened but he wasn't there unlike you, why does he have enough of a grievance to take action but you don't?  

This doesn't make sense, Sonic should be the one who is more upset enough to hit her, but instead sally has to do it, keep in mind sonic shouldn't really be that happy for it because he was partly responsible for everything that even happened, claiming to protect tails while at the same time trying to suck fiona's tits because him and sally broke up at the time. In turn all this did was make sally look like a condensing bitch ( like she needed more hate already ), makes sonic already terrible because again he can't stand up for his fucking little brother or what don't want to hit a girl? or you still feel some tied towards her. This should have been a scene for sonic and fiona to exchange dialog  possibly even bring up past  interactions they had together, we could have had fiona play on sonic'c would be feelings for her and throw it back at him that she knew he was always a selfish self-centered glory hog. but no, everyone keeps there mouth shut and sally punches her when I know she cares for tails and everyone lost respect for fiona at that point this should should have been a moment for sonic to show he cared about tails that day and it still hurt him from what she did to him. And how him needing a rebound could still be eating at the back of his head.


All this potential essentially wasted. I could see after fiona taking enough low blows at sonic to the point where sally steps in and punches her in an act of defending sonic showing she still has faith in him, that would show sally still cares for sonic, and she won't let what happened that day to ruin what they can still have relationship wise.

If I could I would rewrite it in this manner,because again Flynn lets too much slip through the cracks for the sake of...nothing really, then I heard another  Issue is coming that will feature sonic Blaze and Bunnie, bunnie for some reason gets sent to the sol dimension to help blaze, I wonder how much he'll screw up blaze now, maybe that she can't fight at all for better yet she'll be a side character again  get about one page of scenes time and knocked out for the rest of the story....I'd rather sit and listen so sonamy brats gush about there favorite ship then read his stuff.                              

 
sorry for the tangent.. as always if you wish to have follow ups leave it in the comments below.  
 

     
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Quinstiff Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
These are all really good points. Thank you.

Now for a couple of questions:

Aside from Sonic and Sally's relationship with Fiona, what of Tails's relationship with her? We have seen the scene of her trying to woo tails in for defending her, but that was just it. To me, their interaction would've been a bit longer. Maybe She and Tails could make a deal, maybe somehow persuade Tails to come with her, or maybe Tails would go with her on the assumption that he still believes there is good in her. Or maybe they would've already met in secret first before the confrontation. That way, Tails would defend Fiona from further attacks from Sally and Sonic. What do you think?

Also, when the Destructix had gotten Lightning Lynx out of the Raiju clan, Fiona assures him that he will get his revenge on everyone who has wronged him, even though Fiona herself was one of those people who wronged him back in her earlier days. Why did she not already know that? Was this a canonical error on Ian Flynn's part, or is Fiona again acting out of character?
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Skythehedgehog47 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017
I could see that yes, per say that hada meeting before hand so there little exhange in dialog would already be something expected, from the others and tails would beat about the bush about fiona not being as terrible as she is made out ot be jsut slowly trying ot make them see the real light in her at the same time on fiona's end her trying to think of ways to get tails to come ot her side that it would be way better, something to that degree.

and I would call that a  canonical error on Ian Flynn's part.
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Quinstiff Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah, I would too.

I would like to also include that the Destructix would also aid the Freedom Fighters to dissolve the Four Houses per agreement. Then once that is done, Fiona would try to persuade Tails to come with her to help bust Scourge out of Jail. Reason being is that someone worse than him, Finitevus, has taken complete control of Moebius, and only Scourge is the necessary evil to stop him. Fiona even tells him that although Scourge may be evil to the freedom fighters, he, and Fiona, at least cares about his world. Tails, though reluctant to help an old enemy out of Jail, decides to tag along, hoping to know more about Moebius and to help Fiona leave Scourge somehow. So, afterwards, Tails would consult with Sally and Sonic about his decision to go with Fiona. Of course both Sally and Sonic wholeheartedly disagree on that idea, but after a while Tails manages to get them to agree. Sally makes Fiona swear that nothing bad will happen to Tails, and Fiona promises that nothing will happen to him as long as he's with her. Afterwards, Sonic and Sally tearfully hugs Tails one more time before saying goodbye, then Tails and Fiona go through a warp ring, and off to save Scourge.

I bet that sounds like a good idea, don't you agree?
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Skythehedgehog47 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017
well thisis good because it gives tails a character arc and showing him making his own decisions and trusting fiona adn even standing against sonic and sally and managing to convince them of the choice he made to help fiona, I really to love the idea XD
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Quinstiff Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you! I appreciate it!
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Skythehedgehog47 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017
your welcome ^^
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